tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5752581676640511782.post8308105725807471934..comments2024-02-27T01:14:56.822-05:00Comments on Malice Blackheart: The Ghost/Writer: Dead Poet SobrietyMalice Blackhearthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12049611646521068431noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5752581676640511782.post-56670492698252840302009-11-12T21:52:46.782-05:002009-11-12T21:52:46.782-05:00I really like how you take the reader out of the p...I really like how you take the reader out of the poem, kind of a behind the scenes moment with these lines:<br /><br />“You might want to check your meter.”<br />Check this, you pretentious cunt.<br /><br />HA ha. makes me laugh. <br /><br />And who doesn't want the image of Emily masturbating in their head, right? <br /><br />This feels less edited and precise than usual and makes me feel like an outsider wishing I knew enough to get all the jokes.Mrs. B. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07523283961030307659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5752581676640511782.post-36282588331081237112009-11-10T04:12:25.803-05:002009-11-10T04:12:25.803-05:00Rising the dead by chanting their poetry, the Dead...Rising the dead by chanting their poetry, the Dead Poets Gang did.<br /><br />And you people raise them bland and boring. Improve your vodoo s'il vous plait. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02092709336682168145noreply@blogger.com